egg
March 4, 2008
On Dragon Boat Festival last year. My family felt boring at home. Suddenly, my father told me that if you stand the egg on Dragon Boat Festival, it will be very easy. So my father and I went to buy two eggs. Few minutes passed, we try to make the egg stand. At first, we didn’t stand the egg. So I gave up, but my dad still did it. And then, he successed. After that, I came back to try it again. But it never stood.
Finally, we took the picture and my father asked me to found the reason. So I surfed the internet. And I know the reason; The Earth’s spin axis is tilted with respect to its orbital plane.
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Dear Edwar:
Both you and your dad are like scientist, enjoying doing experiments and finding the reason. This is an amazing picture. However ther are mistakes in the expressions.”My family felt boring. “you stand the egg on Dragon Boat Festival, it will be very easy.” “Few minute passed”, and “we started to stand the egg”. You don’t stand the egg’ instead you were trying to make the egg stand.